This was another prompt short story swap - the prompt was to write a story set in an unusual location.
Marla and Dave stood in the entryway of their new home.
Well, ‘new’ being a completely relative term of course. It hadn’t been new in
over a hundred years, and possibly hadn’t even been anyone’s home for nearly a
decade.
“It would have been nice if they’d cleaned it a little.”
Marla sighed.
“Well, they did remove that junk pile from out the front.”
“True.”
Marla looked around the vast foyer. The setting sun cast
dull orange patterns on the floor and highlighted every dust mote swirling
through the room. The tendrils of musty uninhabited cobwebs dangled eerily from
the architraves. They wandered further into the house.
“Oh, I love this.” Marla whispered gleefully. She skipped to
the doorway of a storage cupboard built under the wide staircase. “This is so
cute; we could pretend we’re in Harry Potter.”
“What?” Dave furrowed his brow in confusion.
Marla rolled her eyes. “You know, Harry Potter lived under
the stairs.”
“I thought Harry Potter lived in Hogsbreath.”
“No, silly, that’s Hogwart’s
but before that, he lived under the stairs.”
“Oh, how silly of me.”
Marla smiled cheekily.
“Let’s go in.”
“I really don’t think that’s a very good idea. I’m going to
need an antihistamine just from standing here.”
Marla yanked open the door with all her strength. It made a
loud groan of defiance, then swung out suddenly. The air in the dark space was
cold and stale, and considerably less dusty than the rest of the house. The
jagged edges of the staircase’s underbelly formed the steep ceiling and three
empty shelves adorned the opposite wall, which was unpainted, unpapered and
about four feet in front of the door. She took Dave’s resisting hand and pulled
him in.
She reached out and pulled the door closed; it clicked back
into position without a struggle.
“Oh, wow, it’s so dark in here. I can’t even see my hand.”
She could feel the movement of the air as she waved her hand in front of her
face. “If I ever become a vampire, I could totally sleep in here during the
day.”
Dave sighed. “Remind me to make you a list of books you
should read.”
“Why? I’ve got plenty of books.”
“I’m talking about ones that aren’t stupid.”
“This room is so cool. I want to make it into something
really fun – but if you don’t watch out – it might just become your bedroom.”
Dave leaned over and kissed Marla in apology. He missed his
mark slightly in the dark, and in landed on her eyeball, but the intention was
clear.
“Alright, let’s get out of here before we suffocate.” Dave
reached for the door handle; Marla could hear his hand sliding around on the
wood as he searched for its location. She heard the metallic rattling as he
grasped the knob. Then she heard a thump and clamour as the knob came loose and
clattered to the floor.
They both crouched wordlessly to the floor hands sliding
around in pursuit of the door knob. Twice they banged their heads together and
at one point, Marla tried to pick up Dave’s foot , but eventually, Dave found
the old hardware and spent what seemed like another stretch of eternity trying
to find the hole it came loose from.
“It’s not working.” He finally said after about ten minutes
of swearing, grunting and thumping on the door.
“What do you mean?”
“Well, I can get it back in the hole, but it won’t catch – I
can’t make it turn properly.”
“Can’t we just break the door down?” So that tried that for
a few minutes, to no avail.
“Maybe this was where they kept the naughty children.” Marla
joked.
“Maybe it’s where they stored the dead bodies.” Dave replied
grimly.
“Wow, and you think I’m the one who needs to read some new
books.”
Marla felt her way around the room, getting a few painful
splinters in her fingertips in the process.
“Hey.” She said suddenly, “there’s something loose here.”
She felt around the rectangular panel in the tallest wall of the room. “I think it’s got hinges.”
Marla and Dave poked, pulled and wiggled the loose panel
until it silently swung away from them revealing a space that was much narrower
than a hallway, but wider than the space between two walls has ever needed to
be.
It was dustier than the cupboard under the stairs, but less
so than the rest of the house. There was a small amount of visibility, on
account of the cracks in the upstairs floorboards. Marla slid into the gap
sideways and shuffled along until there was room enough for Dave to join her.
Although Dave was twice as heavy as his wife, the space was wide enough to
accommodate him – not comfortably, but enough that he could shuffle alongside
her without fear of becoming stuck.
“What are we doing?” Something about the area made a whisper
seem more appropriate than his regular speaking voice.
“Well, we’ll follow this along until we find a way out.”
“And if we don’t?”
“Well, I’m sure when we find the killer’s lair, there’ll be
a shovel or a pitchfork or something and we’ll hack our way back into the
house, Mr Eternal Pessimist.”
“How on Earth can you expect me to be an optimist in the
circumstances?”
They shuffled awkwardly further towards the rear of the
house and came upon an intersection; the only option, however, was the path to
the left. The path to the right, (aside from being almost entirely occupied
with cobwebs) was only about six inches wide; so they manoeuvred themselves
clumsily around the right-angle. As they followed this path along, and the
light outside faded, so too did the light in the passage.
“Marla, stop.” Dave suddenly reached out his right arm and grabbed
Marla left shoulder. “I can’t even see you anymore. I think we should go back.
Who knows where we are.”
“I think we’re behind the kitchen.”
Just as Marla turned to face Dave, there came a thump that
rattled the walls around them.
“What was that?” Whispered Dave.
“The back door?”
Now she could hear what sounded like heavy boots walking
across the floor alongside them. It sounded as though about three of four men
had walked into the kitchen through the back door.
The men must have been barely six feet in front of where
Marla and Dave stood. The voices sounded muffled and distant, but were loud
enough to be understood clearly.
“So where is this stuff?”
“Dunno, Ray said it was inside the house somewhere – start
looking.”
“You sure no one’s here?”
“ ’Course I’m sure – I told you the new owners are supposed
to turn up in the morning.”
Marla and Dave were supposed to arrive the following
morning, they’d planned on spending the night in a motel in town and arriving
at first light to assess what work needed to be done. Since they’d checked into
the motel earlier than expected, they decided to go for a walk through the tiny
township and have a quick glimpse at the house, before finding somewhere
affordable to eat dinner.
At the thought of food, Marla’s stomach growled at her but
all she could think was thank goodness we
didn’t leave the car out front. That was followed by a more horrible
thought.
“Did we shut the front door?” Her whisper was barely a
breath, but Dave had obviously heard her, since he shrugged his shoulders
uncertainly.
They could hear doors slamming around the kitchen and some
of the footsteps moved to other areas of the house. They could hear at least
one set tramp its way upstairs.
Marla and Dave both jumped, startled when a voice shouted
from directly in front of them.
“I found the guns.” The sound of heavy fabric being pulled
along wood sounded as though it was right under their feet.
A distant muffled voice from upstairs yelled back something
that sounded like “Keep your voice down you idiot.”
The men stomped around the house opening and slamming doors
of all sizes, some opened easily, some sounded as though they were resisting
the assault of the intruders. The few large pieces of furniture that remained
were dragged out of their positions and rummaged through. A deafening bang
directly above their head told them that the enormous wardrobe in the master
bedroom had been tipped over.
The men molested the house for over an hour. At no point did
they indicate the discovery of the room beneath the stairs. As the time passed,
Marla and Dave both began to shift uncomfortably, their ankles, knees and backs
burnt with the agony of standing still for so long. They didn’t dare move an
inch, though. The conversation between the men was scant, but when they did
speak, the tones became increasingly more tense and aggressive.
Eventually, they could hear mumbling on the first floor. The
men must have been in the entryway, or the living area off the foyer. Marla and
Dave could not hear the words, but they could hear the tension in the voices
increase until all four shouting voices drowned each other out.
The voices stopped abruptly at the deafening sound of
gunshots. Marla felt the blood run from her body and she became icy cold. After
a few minutes she inhaled deeply and wondered whether she’d been holding her
breath the entire time.
Just when the silence was becoming unbearable, the thumps
around the house resumed, someone was walking laboriously back and forward
between the back door and the front room.
The sound of a car engine starting brought the couple back
into reality and Marla realised her face was saturated with the clammy moisture
of sweat and the salty wetness of tears.
“What do we do?” She whispered.
“We have to go back.” Dave replied.
“We can’t, they didn’t open the door; we have to keep
looking for a way out.”
They kept on the way they were going, the floor suddenly
began to descend and wind steeply until they realised they were well below the
floorboards of the house.
“I can’t see a bloody thing” Dave whispered hoarsely.
“The walls are gone now; we must be in a room of some kind.”
“Maybe there’s a light.” They both felt around the walls
near where the hallway ended until Dave kicked his toe on an old dolphin torch.
It still worked, barely; but the dirty, dim orange light was
enough to see around the tiny room. The walls seemed to be bare packed earth,
the ceiling was not the floorboards above as they’d expected, but rather, more
compacted dirt; and the dimensions were about half that of the average
bathroom. Sitting boldly in the middle of the room was a dusty old suitcase,
probably navy blue, but it was hard to tell in this weak light. Beside the
suitcase was a dirty step ladder and in the middle of the ceiling, a wooden
square that could only be a trapdoor.
Dave pulled the ladder directly below the hatch and banged
on the door with the outside of his fist, covering his eyes to avoid having
them fill with dust and debris. The door gave way and opened upward, banging on
the ground above. Dave pulled himself through the gap, then laying on his
stomach, reached down into the room. Marla passed the old suitcase up before
climbing out of the hole herself.
They found themselves in an old shed behind the house; they
took a brief look inside the suitcase and walked out of the building into the
night. The stars were bright and the moon was full, and although there were no
street lights in this part of town, compared to where they’d been for the last
few hours, they squinted against the brightness.
They walked back to their motel, hand in hand agreeing to go
straight to the real estate the following morning to put the house back on the
market.
And while they waited for it to sell, they would be able to
live quite comfortably on the suitcase of cash in Dave’s left hand.